http://sadfreezingbrit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sadfreezingbrit.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sadfreezingbrit_archive 2011-03-25 03:36 am (UTC)

[ It only takes him a moment to open his eyes, but a few blinks longer to find his voice. It's quiet, slurred and unpleasant to produce through split lips. ]

Could be better.
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